How to write about people
Inclusive language
We are inclusive and respectful when we write about people. That means we emphasise the person, not their condition.
Avoid passive, victim words.
Ages
Don’t reference a person’s age unless it’s relevant to what you’re writing.
Ages are given between commas.
Good:
John Smith, 32, a doctor…
Bad:
John Smith, aged 32, a doctor…
These are our agreed age ranges and how to reference them:
• fertilised egg = from conception to 14 days
• embryo = from 2 to 9 weeks
• unborn baby = from week 10 to birth
• baby = 0 to 12 months
• child = 1 to 12 years
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• people, adults = 20 to 59 years
• older people = 60+ years – don’t use old age pensioner, pensioner or OAP
Examples
Babies and children under 6 automatically get a GP visit card.
If your baby gets chickenpox, you should take them to a GP if they are under 6 months old.
Chickenpox can cause serious problems for
Adults and older people (over 60) are more at risk of complications from chickenpox.
Disability, medical conditions, mental and cognitive conditions
Don’t refer to a person’s disability or condition unless it’s relevant to what you’re writing.
If you need to mention it, use language that emphasizes the person first: ‘person with a disability’ rather than ‘disabled person.’
Never use the words ‘suffer,’ ‘victim,’ ‘mentally ill’ or ‘handicapped’.
Do not use these words | Use these words |
| (the) handicapped, (the) disabled, invalid, cripple | people with disabilities, person with a disability, child with a disability |
| afflicted by, suffers from, | |
| confined to a wheelchair, in a | |
| mentally handicapped, retarded, mad | with a learning disability (singular) with learning disabilities (plural) |
| disabled toilet, disabled parking | accessible toilet, accessible parking |
| the deaf | deaf person; |
| the blind | blind people; blind and partially sighted people |
an epileptic, diabetic, depressive | person with epilepsy, diabetes, depression or someone who has epilepsy, diabetes, depression |
| normal, able-bodied, healthy (in context) | non-disabled person |
Gender and sexuality
Use gender-neutral text wherever possible. Use ‘them’, ‘their’, ‘they’. Use common neutral alternatives, like ‘businessperson’ instead of ‘businessman.’
Use the following words as modifiers, but never as nouns:
- lesbian
- gay
- bisexual
- homosexual
- transgender (not ‘transgendered’)
- trans
- LGBT
Good:
He is bisexual
Bad:
He is a bisexual.
Don’t use:
- lifestyle
- preference
- gay or same-sex marriage (it’s just marriage unless the distinction is technically important to what you’re writing)
- sex abuse (use sexual abuse)